Good Poems
GregD -- Thursday, May 01, 2003 -- 12:25:42 AMPut up a good poem. Tell us what you like about it.
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This thread inspired by the Garrison Keillor anthology Good Poems.
We can post poems and discuss specific poems posted, but no far-ranging discussions of poetry or other off-topic stuff, please.
And just to get us started...
I Like My Own Poems
by Jack Grapes
I like my own poems
best.
I quote from them
from time to time
saying, "A poet once said,"
and then follow up
with a line or two
from one of my own poems
appropriate to the event.
How those lines sing!
All that wisdom and beauty!
Why it tickles my ass
off its spine.
"Why those lines are mine!"
I say
and Jesus, what a bang
I get out of it.
I like the ideas in them,
my poems,
ideas that hit home.
They speak to me.
I mean, I understand
what the hell
the damn poet's
talking about.
"Why I've been there,
the same thing," I shout,
and Christ! What a shot it is,
a shot.
And hey,
The words!
Whew!
I can hardly stand it.
Words sure do not fail
this guy, I say.
From some world
only he knows
he bangs the bong,
but I can feel it
in the wood,
in the wood of the word,
rising to its form
in the world.
"Now, you gotta be good
to do that!" I say
and damn! It just shakes
my heart,
you know?
I love poets with a plain speaking voice, and Grapes sure has it. It's not as concrete as I'd like, but the tone of the speaker is just fantastic. It's funny, heartfelt, and you understand how he feels. Anyone who's written a poem and come back to it, read it, and understood yourself just a little better knows the feeling, even if the poem was crap otherwise.
Plus, it's got the word "bong" in it. Heh heh heh.
I like that. I particularly like "Words sure do not fail this guy." That cracks me up.
The first poem I ever read by Wislawa Szymborska was "Hitler's First Photograph." It literally gave me chills. She's my favorite poet now.
And who's this little fellow in his itty-bitty robe?
That's tiny baby Adolf, the Hitler's little boy!
Will be grow up to be an LL.D.?
Or a tenor in Vienna's Opera House?
Whose teensy hand is this, whose little ear and eye and nose?
Whose tummy full of milk, we just don't know:
Where will those tootsy-wootsies finally wander?
To garden, to school, to an office, to a bride,
Maybe to the Burgermeister's daughter?
Precious little angel, mommy's sunshine, honey bun,
While he was being born a year ago
There was no dearth of signs on the earth and in the sky:
Spring sun, geraniums in windows,
The organ-grinder's music in the yard,
A lucky fortune wrapped in rosy paper,
Then just before the labor, his mother's fateful dream:
A dove seen in dreams means joyful news.
If it is caught, a long-awaited guest will come.
Knock knock, who's there, it's Adolf's heartchen knocking.
A little pacifier, diaper, rattle, bib,
Our bouncing baby boy, thank God and knock on wood, is well,
Looks just like his folks, like a kitten in a basket,
Like the tots in every other family album.
Shush, let's not start crying, sugar.
The camera will click from under that black hood.
The Klinger Atelier, Grabenstrasse, Braunau,
And Braunau is a small but worthy town:
Honest businesses, obliging neighbors,
Smell of yeast dough, of gray soap.
No one hears howling dogs, or fate's footsteps.
A history teacher loosens his collar
And yawns over homework.
I love that Jack Grape one. Especially "they speak to me"
The Hitler's Photograph piece gave me chills.
The Orange
by Wendy Cope
At lunchtime I bought a huge orange--
The size of it made us all laugh.
I peeled it and shared it with Robert and Dave--
They got quarters and I had a half.
And that orange, it made me so happy,
As ordinary things often do
Just lately. The shopping. A walk in the park.
This is peace and contentment. It's new.
The rest of the day was quite easy.
I did all the jobs on my list
And enjoyed them and had some time over.
I love you. I'm glad I exist.
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My feeling is, if that poem doesn't hit you somewhere you're somehow empty. I go back to this poem in my mind about once every 6 months -- it just sticks.
Doing my part to support a wonderful thread idea....
After Reading Mickey in the Night Kitchen for the Third Time Before Bed
I'm in the milk and the milk's in me... I'm Mickey!
My daughter spreads her legs
to find her vagina:
hairless, this mistaken
bit of nomenclature
is what a stranger cannot touch
without her yelling. She demands
to see mine and momentarily
we're a lopsided star
among the spilled toys,
my prodigious scallops
exposed to her neat cameo.
And yet the same glazed
tunnel, layered sequences.
She is three; that makes this
innocent. We're pink!
she shrieks, and bounds off.
Every month she wants
to know where it hurts
and what the wrinkled string means
between my legs. This is good blood
I say, but that's wrong, too.
How to tell her that it's what makes us--
black mother, cream child.
That we're in the pink
and the pink's in us.
Edit: It's by Rita Dove
The Plot against the Giant
First Girl
When this yokel comes maundering,
Whetting his hacker,
I shall run before him,
Diffusing the civilest odors
Out of geraniums and unsmelled flowers.
It will check him.
Second Girl
I shall run before him,
Arching cloths besprinkled with colors
As small as fish-eggs.
The threads
Will abash him.
Third Girl
Oh, la . . . le pauvre!
I shall run before him,
With a curious puffing.
He will bend his ear then.
I shall whisper
Heavenly labials in a world of gutturals.
It will undo him.
Here's a good bad poem that suits my lowbrow tastes. I wish I could credit the author properly, but I only know his online name.
Ode to a Vegan
by Rum
Delicate spine of young hedgehog
Graceful tail of polliwog
Lithe long legs of leaping frog
Tastes like chicken.
Powerful muscles of crocodile
Eagle drifting so gracile
Grazing Citellus (or spermophile)
Tastes like chicken.
That about covers Stevens, doesn't it?
If I had to summarize, I'd say "Poetry is apparently a sexual weapon, and one that beats out perfume and pretty visuals, at that." I don't know what the giant's supposed to symbolize, but take your pick.
Hey, excellent, thank you. Now there are two Stevens poems about which I can provide cocktail party chatter if necessary.
The other is The Emperor of Ice Cream, which, if you press me, I will say is about death. And feet.
Behold the duck
It does not cluck
a cluck it lacks
-- it quacks
It's especially fond
of puddle or pond
and when it sups
it's bottoms up.
Another good poem by an insurance executive (I think he's a VP or something), Ted Kooser:
AT THE OFFICE EARLY
Rain has beaded the panes
of my office windows,
and in each little lens
the bank at the corner
hangs upside down.
What wonderful music
this rain must have made
in the night, a thousand banks
turned over, the change
crashing out of the drawers
and bouncing upstairs
to the roof, the soft
percussion of ferns
dropping out of their pots,
the ballpoint pens
popping out of their sockets
in a fluffy snow
of deposit slips.
Now all day long,
as the sun dries the glass,
I'll hear the soft piano
of banks righting themselves,
the underpaid tellers
counting their nickels and dimes.
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I love the playfulness of this poem. Hardly anything is more straitlaced and dull than a local bank, but by turning that image upside down (in more ways than one) the narrator discovers a charming anarchy. In the end, it's back to nickel-and-dime mundanity, but you're left with the sense that everything contains some hidden delight if you can happen upon the right way, or upside down or slant (to borrow from Emily Dickinson) way, to see it.
Sherman Alexie
Reservation Love Song
I can meet you
in Springdale buy you beer
& take you home
in my one-eyed Ford
I can pay your rent
on HUD house get you free
food from the BIA
get your teeth fixed at IHS
I can buy you alcohol
& not drink it all
while you're away I won't fuck
any of your cousins
if I don't get too drunk
I can bring old blankets
to sleep with in winter
they smell like grandmother
hands digging up roots
they have powerful magic
we can sleep good
we can sleep warm
I like the brevity, the simplicity, the feeling of naked honesty, the way he breaks lines, and the language he chooses.
Another of my Szymborska favorites - actually, probably my favorite poem by her - is Could Have. I saw it get a bit of play after 9/11, and it's obvious why it did. She grew up in Poland during the war, however, and most of her poems seem to be informed by that experience. She spends a lot of time thinking about the randomness of fate, or how odd it is, in a way, that time moves on even after the most appalling of events. One of her poems talks about how mundane life continues in places like Hastings and Hiroshima and Belleau Wood. Anyway, here's the poem.
It could have happened.
It had to happen.
It happened earlier. Later.
Nearer. Farther off.
It happened, but not to you.
You were saved because you were the first.
You were saved because you were the last.
Alone. With others.
On the right. The left.
Because it was raining. Because of the shade.
Because the day was sunny.
You were in luck - there was a forest.
You were in luck - there were no trees.
You were in luck - a rake, a hook, a beam, a brake
A jamb, a turn, a quarter-inch, an instant...
So you're still here? Still dizzy from
another dodge, close shave, reprieve?
One hole in the net and you slipped through?
I couldn't be more shocked or
speechless.
Listen,
how your heart pounds inside me.
A Mary Oliver poem that someone posted at TT, which I saved in a text file so I can read it occasionally:
Landscape
Isn't it plain the sheets of moss, except that
they have no tongues, could lecture
all day if they wanted about
spiritual patience? Isn't it clear
the black oaks along the path are standing
as though they were the most fragile of flowers ?
Every morning I walk like this around
the pond, thinking: if the doors of my heart
ever close, I am as good as dead.
Every morning, so far, I'm alive. And now
the crows break off from the rest of the darkness
and burst up into the sky -- as though
all night they had thought of what they would like
their lives to be, and imagined
their strong, thick wings.
I've loved this one since I was little:
Overheard on a Saltmarsh
Nymph, nymph, what are your beads?
Green glass, goblin. Why do you stare at them?
Give them me.
No.
Give them me. Give them me.
No.
Then I will howl all night in the reeds,
Lie in the mud and howl for them.
Goblin, why do you love them so?
They are better than stars or water,
Better than voices of winds that sing,
Better than any man's fair daughter,
Your green glass beads on a silver ring.
Hush, I stole them out of the moon.
Give me your beads, I want them.
No.
I will howl in the deep lagoon
For your green glass beads, I love them so.
Give them me. Give them.
No.
-- Harold Monro
I like that too!
Here are some of my favorite stanzas from "The Eve of St. Agnes," by John Keats. The setup is that Porphyro is hiding in Madeline's bedroom; she's gone to bed hoping to dream of the man she'll marry, a St. Agnes Eve tradition. Porphyro has set up a feast to woo her.
XXX.
And still she slept an azure-lidded sleep,
In blanched linen, smooth, and lavender’d,
While he from forth the closet brought a heap
Of candied apple, quince, and plum, and gourd;
With jellies soother than the creamy curd,
And lucent syrops, tinct with cinnamon;
Manna and dates, in argosy transferr’d
From Fez; and spiced dainties, every one,
From silken Samarcand to cedar’d Lebanon.
XXXI.
These delicates he heap’d with glowing hand
On golden dishes and in baskets bright
Of wreathed silver: sumptuous they stand
In the retired quiet of the night,
Filling the chilly room with perfume light.—
“And now, my love, my seraph fair, awake!
“Thou art my heaven, and I thine eremite:
“Open thine eyes, for meek St. Agnes’ sake,
“Or I shall drowse beside thee, so my soul doth ache.”
XXXII.
Thus whispering, his warm, unnerved arm
Sank in her pillow. Shaded was her dream
By the dusk curtains:—’twas a midnight charm
Impossible to melt as iced stream:
The lustrous salvers in the moonlight gleam;
Broad golden fringe upon the carpet lies:
It seem’d he never, never could redeem
From such a stedfast spell his lady’s eyes;
So mus’d awhile, entoil’d in woofed phantasies.
XXXIII.
Awakening up, he took her hollow lute,—
Tumultuous,—and, in chords that tenderest be,
He play’d an ancient ditty, long since mute,
In Provence call’d, “La belle dame sans mercy:”
Close to her ear touching the melody;—
Wherewith disturb’d, she utter’d a soft moan:
He ceased—she panted quick—and suddenly
Her blue affrayed eyes wide open shone:
Upon his knees he sank, pale as smooth-sculptured stone.
XXXIV.
Her eyes were open, but she still beheld,
Now wide awake, the vision of her sleep:
There was a painful change, that nigh expell’d
The blisses of her dream so pure and deep
At which fair Madeline began to weep,
And moan forth witless words with many a sigh;
While still her gaze on Porphyro would keep;
Who knelt, with joined hands and piteous eye,
Fearing to move or speak, she look’d so dreamingly.
XXXV.
“Ah, Porphyro!” said she, “but even now
“Thy voice was at sweet tremble in mine ear,
“Made tuneable with every sweetest vow;
“And those sad eyes were spiritual and clear:
“How chang’d thou art! how pallid, chill, and drear!
“Give me that voice again, my Porphyro,
“Those looks immortal, those complainings dear!
“Oh leave me not in this eternal woe,
“For if thou diest, my Love, I know not where to go.”
XXXVI.
Beyond a mortal man impassion’d far
At these voluptuous accents, he arose,
Ethereal, flush’d, and like a throbbing star
Seen mid the sapphire heaven’s deep repose;
Into her dream he melted, as the rose
Blendeth its odour with the violet,—
Solution sweet: meantime the frost-wind blows
Like Love’s alarum pattering the sharp sleet
Against the window-panes; St. Agnes’ moon hath set.
I like how stanza 36 is just like a Hollywood movie--as the lovers embrace, the camera moves away to a fireplace or, in this case, the window.
Marya, that Mary Oliver poem gave me chills. Thank you.
I had the pleasure of editing a poetry anthology last year. Oh, there were piles of crappy poems to go through, but what bliss to find the good ones, and what bliss generally to get paid for reading poems.
Strawberries, by Edwin Morgan
There were never strawberries
like the ones we had
that sultry afternoon
sitting on the step
of the open french window
facing each other
your knees held in mine
the blue plates in our laps
the strawberries glistening
in the hot sunlight
we dipped them in sugar
looking at each other
not hurrying the feast
for one to come
the empty plates
laid on the stone together
with the two forks crossed
and I bent towards you
sweet in that air
in my arms
abandoned like a child
from your eager mouth
the taste of strawberries
in my memory
lean back again
let me love you
let the sun beat
on our forgetfulness
one hour of all
the heat intense
and summer lightning
on the Kilpatrick hills
let the storm wash the plates
Cinders by Roger McGough
After the pantomime, carrying you back to the car
On the coldest night of the year
My coat, black leather, cracking in the wind.
Through the darkness we are guided by a star
It is the one the Good Fairy gave you
You clutch it tightly, your magic wand.
And I clutch you tightly for fear you blow away
For fear you grow up too soon and - suddenly,
I almost slip, so take it steady down the hill.
Hunched against the wind and hobbling
I could be mistaken for your grandfather
And sensing this, I hold you tighter still.
Knowing that I will never see you dressed for the Ball
Be on hand to warn you against Prince Charmings
And the happy ever afters of pantomime.
On reaching the car I put you into the baby seat
And fumble with straps I have yet to master
Thinking, if only there were more time. More time.
You are crying now. Where is your wand?
Oh no. I can't face going back for it
Let some kid find it in tomorrow's snow.
Waiting in the wings, the witching hour.
Already the car is changing. Smells sweet
Of ripening seed. We must go. Must go.
Oh, wow. That's exquisite.
What a great thread! Just yesterday, a friend asked if I remembered a poem about "The House With Nobody In It," but neither of us could remember all the words. I Googled it, he looked it up in a book of poems his dad had given him (in the early '60s) ... and then he read it to me on the phone and we both got all sniffly and teary-eyed.
The Cinnamon Peeler - Michael Ondaatje
If I were a cinnamon peeler
I would ride your bed
and leave the yellow bark dust
on your pillow.
Your breasts and shoulders would reek
you could never walk through markets
without the profession of my fingers
floating over you. The blind would
stumble certain of whom they approached
though you might bathe
under rain gutters, monsoon.
Here on the upper thigh
at this smooth pasture
neighbour to your hair
or the crease
that cuts your back. This ankle.
You will be known among strangers
as the cinnamon peeler's wife.
I could hardly glance at you
before marriage
never touch you
--your keen nosed mother, your rough brothers.
I buried my hands
in saffron, disguised them
over smoking tar,
helped the honey gatherers . . .
When we swam once
I touched you in water
and our bodies remained free,
you could hold me and be blind of smell.
You climbed the bank and said this is how you touch
other women
the grass cutter's wife, the lime burner's daughter.
And you searched your arms
for the missing perfume
and knew
what good is it
to be the lime burner's daughter
left with no trace
as if not spoken to in the act of love
as if wounded without the pleasure of a scar.
You touched
your belly to my hands
in the dry air and said
I am the cinnamon
peeler's wife. Smell me.
And, just in case you think Roger McGough's only about the melancholy...
The Nearest Forty-two
I want to write a new poem.
What words shall I choose?
I go in. The variety is endless.
Images stretch into infinity.
I dither. Can't make up my mind.
Inspiration becomes impatient.
Stamps its feet. Panicking
I grab the nearest forty-two
Children's Writer
John in the garden
Playing goodies and baddies
Janet in the bedroom
Playing mummies and daddies
Mummy in the kitchen
Washing and wiping
Daddy in the study
Stereotyping
Love that last one.
And, lest we forget, my favourite poem from Ted Hughes' The Birthday Letters:
Red
Red was your colour.
If not red, then white. But red
Was what you wrapped around you.
Blood-red. Was it blood?
Was it red-ochre, for warming the dead?
Haematite to make immortal
The precious heirloom bones, the family bones.
When you had your way finally
Our room was red. A judgement chamber.
Shut casket for gems. The carpet of blood
Patterned with darkenings, congealments.
The curtains -- ruby corduroy blood,
Sheer blood-falls from ceiling to floor.
The cushions the same. The same
Raw carmine along the window-seat.
A throbbing cell. Aztec altar -- temple.
Only the bookshelves escaped into whiteness.
And outside the window
Poppies thin and wrinkle-frail
As the skin on blood,
Salvias, that your father named you after,
Like blood lobbing from the gash,
And roses, the heart's last gouts,
Catastrophic, arterial, doomed.
Your velvet long full skirt, a swathe of blood,
A lavish burgandy.
Your lips a dipped, deep crimson.
You revelled in red.
I felt it raw -- like crisp gauze edges
Of a stiffening wound. I could touch
The open vein in it, the crusted gleam.
Everything you painted you painted white
Then splashed it with roses, defeated it,
Leaned over it, dripping roses,
Weeping roses, and more roses,
Then sometimes, among them, a little bluebird.
Blue was better for you. Blue was wings.
Kingfisher blue silks from San Francisco
Folded your pregnancy
In crucible caresses.
Blue was your kindly spirit -- not a ghoul
But electrified, a guardian, thoughtful.
In the pit of red
You hid from the bone-clinic whiteness.
But the jewel you lost was blue.
